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marinliliz in sandbox_society

Taiki's Birth

Feb 10, 2010 17:09

[Characters]: Yamada Hanatarou, Zaraki Kenpachi, Taiki and Unohana Retsu
[Pairing]: KenHana
[Word Count]: 1250
[Finished]: 09.February.2010
[Beta]: not beta-read
[Warnings]: AU | Mpreg | Crack | Fluff | OOC Zaraki
[Rating]: PG
[A/N]: Because we decided February 10th was Taiki's birthday. Hana is the Japanese word for flower.
Part of the Unexpectedly ( Read more... )

:kenhana, ^slash, .taiki, fanfic, ~mpreg, !baby, *eng

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gokuma February 10 2010, 18:37:56 UTC

Unofortunately, it's the only picture of Taiki we have, I hope somebody (or two "somebodies") will draw him better *looks again at this doodle and hides*

:D

Anyway, the fic is so cute, I love Unohana for being lovely and scary at the same time (she's the only person who can do it so well XD). I wonder if Zaraki is gonna feel guilty about not being by Hana's side when he was giving birth to Taiki; Hanatarou must be scared and a little bit sad that Ken wasn't with him.

This fic is lovely, wolf. Thank you for writing it *hugs Marinwolf*

marinliliz February 10 2010, 18:54:02 UTC

*wags tail* We really have to prod Marianek and Bosska to draw us some baby!Taiki alone, with the parents, with the other kids. I actually adore this doodle, I kinda fitted the description of Kenpachi's 1st time seeing him to itXD

Unohana rally pulls the scary mother act.XDD

I was gonna do the whole Hanatarou going through it alone but my muse wanted to hear this from Zaraki's pov.

Thank you.

gokuma February 10 2010, 19:28:58 UTC

Your fic-writing skills are EEEEEEVIL XD They make me read the whole series again XD

marinliliz February 10 2010, 19:32:46 UTC

MUHAHAHAHAHAHA

kashinosei February 10 2010, 19:34:26 UTC

Ah, just read your whole fic, though somehow from 4, no numbering...but still follows through. I really enjoyed it. Will we have more?

marinliliz February 10 2010, 19:46:23 UTC

Ah yes, the numbering got dropped along the way^_^' I should fix that. It's because the outtake and the New Year drabble weren't supposed to be part of the fic, just side stories but ended up fitting the timeline anyway.

We'll definitely have more, only I'm writing these whenever inspiration or occasion strike rather than a well plotted fic, so definitely more, just don't know when.

I'm glad you enjoyed. Thank you for reading;]

kashinosei February 10 2010, 19:58:04 UTC

Side stories? ah...but the timeline flows quite nice^^ Thanks~

marinliliz February 10 2010, 20:04:27 UTC

Side stories as in I didn't planned them to be a continuation of the previous chapters, they just happened to fit:P

lnasados February 10 2010, 20:07:20 UTC

WOOOT! We have a baby Yamasa Taiki! Poor tired Hanatorou! So sad Kenpatchi couldn't be there. Would have been a comfort for Mumdad. *LAUGHS* Big dady was worried about breaking the little bundle of joy and Hana had to check anyway to be certain of ten fingers and ten toes. Unohana is just too funny the way she carries off that scary smile. Then Tells Kenpatchi he shush the baby all he wants but he won't stop until he's fed. Then tells him he won't break the baby if he holds and scarily tells him Hanatorou can't do it by himself and sits Knpatchi down. SO LOVED THIS FIC FOR THE NEWEST ADDITION TO SANDBOX SOCIETY! Thank you sooo much!

marinliliz February 11 2010, 14:07:57 UTC

Your comments always put a smile on my face. Thank you♥

Hanatarou is much stronger than he looks like although Kenpachi's presence would've definitely been a plus. And for Kenpachi all that power is all well and stuff when he wants to fight someone to hold his child he kinda got scared he would brake it. Unohana was just being herself.

gymnasticsbaby February 12 2010, 01:15:15 UTC

Aww how adorable. Births are always so special and it's always fun when parents realize infants aren't so terrifying as they look.(My mom used to deliver babies for a living so I met a lot of new parents)I think the drawing needs to go in the baby book.

marinliliz February 12 2010, 13:55:59 UTC

Can't say I've been around many new parents but I take it it's always the same awe feeling at having created a living being. Thank you for reading:]

gokuma February 13 2010, 14:20:41 UTC

Kuchiki School of Drawing kindly accepts your praise :D

iristigerlily February 12 2010, 05:31:47 UTC

Aw, poor Hanatarou having to go through that all by himself :( But such a cute story!

marinliliz February 12 2010, 14:34:51 UTC

I'm sure Kenpachi will make it up to him, Unohana will make sure!XD Thanks

gokuma February 14 2010, 01:10:28 UTC

I'd really love to read a prequel from Hanatarou's POV - how was this day for him. Was he still at home or in hospital when the labor started (//was initiated by doctors)? Did he suddenly feel worse or if it happened gradually - and how he felt about Kenpachi not being by his side.

Will you write something like this? *puppy eyes*

marinliliz February 14 2010, 01:47:11 UTC

One of the reasons I wrote it from Kenpachi's POV was because I couldn't get it right with Hana's:( I'll have to give it some thought.

Hey, maybe you could write a itty-bitty drabble and I could take it from there, I always seem to get inspiration from your work.

In the mean time I've a few Valentine drabbles to post (not Sandbox though) and something for Hikaru's birthday - that is next Friday! *is a hard working wolf*

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