Fic: Sweetness (1/1)

[sandia_spring]

 
Title: Sweetness
Author: sandia_spring
Pairings/Characters: Clark/Bruce
Genres: PWP, Fluff
Rating: R
Warnings: soft-core M/M sex
Spoilers: None
Summary: Clark seduces Bruce with fruit.
Date Of Completion: May 6, 2008
Date Of Posting: May 7, 2008
Disclaimer: I don’t own them, DC does; but if I did own them, we'd never leave the house.
Word Count: 1240
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[taro_twist]

Yay! I had just been wondering whether you would ever grace us with your wonderful fic again, and then you wrote *this* Woohoo! This was absolutely gorgeous. My favorite parts were this:

He had been all over this world and into worlds beyond, seen gods, warriors and emperors, the finest of specimens from humans and species yet unnamed, and still the beauty of this man never ceased to amaze him.

(Eeeee, what an amazing description of Clark through Bruce's eyes!)

And this:

Like Adam, he had taken fruit from his lover, and like Adam, he was suddenly aware of his nakedness, under his armor, inside his own skin

Which was pure, absolutely entrancing poetry. That gave an almost mythic feel to this fic. Just ... how do you come up with lines like that? How? *loves your brain*

“Clark, you cannot seduce me with fruit.”

LOL. Nice try Bruce, nice try =P

This was wonderful! Thank you for writing. :D

[sandia_spring]

Thanks, taro. I'm really glad people are enjoying this. It was a lot of fun to write (especially the yummy parts!) I dunno where the "Adam" line came from, but it just seemed to fit. :)

[hauyne]

OOoooh, this was very hot and sensual!

Not for the first time, a small part of him was amazed that he could play with Kryptonian fire, make love to this man of unimaginable power, and come away unscathed.

I loved this so much! They are so beautiful in the way you described. *sighs happily*

Thanks for sharing this sweet and beautiful story! I'm looking forward to reading more from you. ^o^

[sandia_spring]

*happy smile!!* Thanks rai. I really enjoy your art too. I have been a lurker for a long time and I should be better about posting feedback. *hangs head in shame* I hope to post more stories soon. I just need to think of something to write.

[hauyne]

Oh, thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed my works. ^-^
And please don't worry about feedback to my part. I'm not a good one about feedback too. ^-^;;
Oh, and more stories? Yay! I'll wait for your stories! *bounces happily*

[draqonelle]

Hmmm. So tasty. I really love this fruit kink. And the biblical tone of this piece is decadent purple and sumptuous, like I love my PWPs.

And the idea of Farmboy Kent all sticky and juicy.... purrs. He probably is carrying one in his mouth too.

[sandia_spring]

Glad you enjoyed the fruit. I'd love me some sticky juicy Kryptonian too...mmmmm....

[shadeof]

Mmm... I want peach! :)
Great story! Sweet and hot!

[sandia_spring]

Thanks! Sweet and hot was what I was going for!

[crimsonquills]

I'm not a big fan of peaches, but they really are the perfect sex and seduction fruit, aren't they? *grins* This was deliciously hot. :-) Thank you for sharing!

[sandia_spring]

I think peaches were more likely to be the fruit in the Garden of Eden than apples. Apples just aren't sexy enough, to me anyway. Thanks for reading!