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sandpiper_song

Update

Mar 03, 2008 15:56

I'm not sure if anyone is still on here, besides Samantha anyway, but I think I'll be getting back to this a bit. My first post in a while will be a poem; I don't feel like typing up all that has been going on ( Read more... )

poem

Comments 8

I Like It! inviswritersam March 4 2008, 00:19:45 UTC

Nice imagery. I really enjoy this poem. Will you email it to me? So I can keep a copy for myself? If you want I can try (ahem, try) to edit it if you'd like. Otherwise, I really like it. I love your writing. Keep writing!

Re: I Like It! sandpiper_song March 4 2008, 02:09:54 UTC

Thank you! I'd be happy to email it to you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm happy with how it's turned out, but if you have a critique then I wouldn't be opposed to hear it.

feralbirdgirl March 4 2008, 03:13:14 UTC

the last segment is quite powerful - do keep posting!

Thank you!! sandpiper_song March 5 2008, 02:08:36 UTC

Thank you! I'll try to.

tarketrubywolf March 7 2008, 07:50:02 UTC

I like this. this is really pretty.

Thank you! sandpiper_song March 8 2008, 06:20:36 UTC

Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this peice.

Re: Thank you! tarketrubywolf March 8 2008, 06:29:33 UTC

I always enjoy wighting poems. as you can probably see.

Re: Thank you! sandpiper_song March 9 2008, 23:28:09 UTC

I haven't read your poetry yet, but I love poetry too so I know I'll get to it, lol.