Whisper over again to me, Wonderful words of Life

Apr 18, 2008 12:10


Epiphany Resulting

Downward I look at the ties that bind
Still in this spot without someone to find
The Father I seek
Even though I now weep
Since this epiphany arrived
Breaking my heart, I tried

This path I walk
The one He leads me by
Where I once strayed often
Now His steps I trod

A lonely road it might prove to be
With just my own songs lilting
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inviswritersam April 19 2008, 02:48:15 UTC
I like it. It's sad but very pretty. Again, I'm going to ask if you'd email me a copy. I just like having a copy of your work cause, well, I usually very much enjoy it. You're very good with imagery & feelings...& well better at more structured poetry than I am.

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inviswritersam May 16 2008, 03:41:23 UTC
as I keep saying. Love the poem. I should just ask you to emial me all you works as you make them, I enjoy reading them so.

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