poem from 1-26-09

[sandpiper_song]

Length and breadth and height are lost

Humanity reigns through its weakness is fought

Intellect honed then dulled with emotions

Understanding sifted through clouded notions

Elsewhere sought the hopes of flesh

Seek the attainable grasp as a cherished quest

Hard won prize gathered near

Owned safely guarded within the sphere

Comments

[inviswritersam]

Very nice. It flows very nicely. You're really good with rhyme

[sandpiper_song]

thank you!

[feralbirdgirl]

profound sense of connection - i like the verbings and flow =)

[sandpiper_song]

thank you!