Comments | sandvitchman: Crit Post.

sandvitchman

Crit Post.

Nov 09, 2009 02:43

Just try to make me cry. Actually, I would totally appreciate pointers on how to be better if you have 'em.

IP logging Off, anonymous commenting on, feel free to send some heavy love, there is more than enough of me to go around.

Comments 9

greatwhitebitch January 9 2010, 07:52:05 UTC

THIS IS TOTALLY THE WRONG CHARACTER TO LAVISH PRAISE WITH BUT -

Too bad, he's all I've got for you.

Our interactions have all been ooc, but good GOD, I love seeing you pop up in threads. Even ooc, hell, even trolling, Heavy's just fucking awesome.

*A*

<3 <3 <3 <3 sandvitchman January 11 2010, 01:48:56 UTC

THAT IS OKAY! I ONLY HAVE ONE GUY TOO.

Also, thank you very much!! Sometimes I worry I ooc/troll too much, but then someone beautiful like you says: "hey, you're okay," and then I feel better and am impassioned to troll more.

YOU ENABLE ME. THANK YOU. BUT YOU HAVE THAT BURDEN TO BEAR.

fuckyeahsock February 9 2010, 02:18:09 UTC

FFfffffff you're amazing. Heavy's just so perfect that I don't even know what to saaaay. ;__;

sandvitchman February 18 2010, 20:31:36 UTC

Gosh, I'm kind of crazy flattered. Especially since you say this after I've spent so long in hiatus.

Thank you, I'm glad you like him.

ofdensen March 3 2010, 10:06:43 UTC

Heavy is hot. Okay. THERE, I SAID IT.

sandvitchman March 4 2010, 03:19:42 UTC

TAKE IT BACK! THOSE WORDS DON'T COMPUTE.
HEAVY IS NOT HOT UNLESS HE'S ON FIRE.

AND WHEN HE'S ON FIRE,... a delicious aroma of BBQ permeates the air...

anonymous March 4 2010, 00:55:41 UTC

I like your Heavy but I'd like to see more of him as a person and less of a comic relief. Most of what I see your Heavy doing is trolling and hitting blindly on women and being herp derp in places. Which is great and IC, but I feel like there's something missing. The rest of the Team Fortress cast has built up CR with the other cast members and changed and adapted after experiencing things on Atia. Heavy feels just the same as when he arrived, like nothing is having any more than a surface impact on him.

TL;DR give me a ring anon? sandvitchman March 4 2010, 03:18:15 UTC

Thank you VERY much for the crit! I wish you weren't anon, I'd like to talk to you about this. Ah well. Do feel free to send me a PM if you'd like / can.
Your comment actually will allow me to get a few things off my chest re: playing Heavy.I do nearly agree completely with you by the way.

Anyway, I know that Heavy seems pretty Herp Derp all over the place and he blindly flirts, but the majority (or at least most recent majority) of this activity has been out of Atia canon.

You're right too, about things not having more than a surface effect on Heavy. The thing is, even though he isn't as thick as he appears (and the instances where it turns out he is smarter than he acts, are usually in logs that are less seen and less shared due to being less funny) he is still pretty thick (and thick skinned emotionally too). This is more due to what I assume is his outlook on life; he doesn't much let things get him down ( ... )

REMEMBAH ME!? ;D wariotime March 25 2010, 02:33:58 UTC

I can sum this up in three words:

YOU. ARE. PERFECT.

That's it. You RP as Heavy perfectly. I've only read some of your logs that slip onto TF2chan and RPed with you once but you are absolutely amazing as the Heavy. Whether he's telling tiny babies to avoid soda pop, arguing with shopkeepers about penises or even going through srs business, he always stays IC. I can't think of a single thing to criticize.

I wouldn't be surprised if you end writing dialogue for Valve someday.