Revisions

[sandy_williams]

Yes. Still. I don't know why this round is so damn difficult. It's not like the first round in which I had to write entirely new scenes and do a few big changes. Most of the tweaks are just that - tweaks.

And yet, progress is slow. I have a list of 5 things left to do. 5 little things. On Friday, I had a list of 9 little things. At least I'm making

Comments

[music_lover3]

I really liked this scene. I want to know more!!

Good luck with finishing revisions!

[sandy_williams]

Glad you liked it! And thanks for the luck - I just finished them!

[music_lover3]

YAY!! Congrats!

[jengt]

Fun snippet. Lots of tension in there. :)

[sandy_williams]

Thanks, chica!

[anonymous]

Hey, I just wanted to come over and thank you for your nice comment on my name over at Kiersten's blog. It made my day!

Jeigh

P.S. I especially like the line, "His first sign of impatience is a slow blink." It paints a whole picture for me.

[sandy_williams]

Hi, Jeigh!

Yes. I totally love your name. :-) Thanks for stopping by!

[tracy_d74]

I like the snippet...great tension.

And as far as revisions go..."You can do'et!!!"

[sandy_williams]

Thanks! And I finished my revisions! A whole day earlier than I thought I would. Yay!

Great snippet!

[anonymous]

Though we won't be going in this direction anymore, I really, really like this scene!! Are there more snippets?? Just for me and Kat to enjoy?? (okay, I'm being greedy now, hehe)

Cheers,
Jo

Re: Great snippet!

[sandy_williams]

heh Thanks! I have about a chapter and a half of this. The end of this chapter is really, really good. ;-)