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borgmama1of5 June 4 2016, 06:04:32 UTC
This leaves Jensen believing that he doesn’t know how to love, that cold-bloodedness runs through his veins like a birthright. It’s what makes accepting Jared’s open-hearted love so difficult for him.

Devastating lines.

4th read and I still felt my heart breaking even as I knew what was coming...then I had to go back and reread the last few and if you don't give me a resolution SOON I am going to implode with anxiety--is there any possible way this mess can have a happy--or even a just not-horribly-sad ending?!?!

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sandymg June 4 2016, 06:09:11 UTC
Super pleased you liked my edit of your edit :) Of course it can have a happy ending. That part isn't that hard -- just getting them there is :)

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annisach June 4 2016, 14:23:26 UTC
OMG, a new BeachVerse! Rolling around in it. Such a devastatingly haunting chapter, love Danni's perspective. My heart aches for Jared, Danni & Jensen. The ending of your last chapter about killed me. Now I have a glimmer of hope for them all.

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sandymg June 4 2016, 15:49:05 UTC
Thank you. I did enjoy writing the Danni POV and felt it was a long time coming. There will be more. Stay tuned.

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fireheart13 June 6 2016, 01:14:59 UTC
SO freaking happy to have a new bit of Beach verse even when I know its going to rip my heart up into tiny shreds LOL!

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sandymg June 6 2016, 02:45:54 UTC
I am happy that you are happy! Thanks for reading <3

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zara_zee June 6 2016, 10:19:20 UTC
Love this 'verse. But damn, did this rip my heart to shreds. :(

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sandymg June 7 2016, 03:21:32 UTC
Thanks for reading and hanging in!

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tcs1121 June 8 2016, 03:50:35 UTC
This verse is still breathtaking. Thank you for continuing it.

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sandymg June 10 2016, 12:34:31 UTC
Hi there. So pleased you are still around reading this :). I had quite a dry spell. I hope I can update at a brisker pace now. Thanks for hanging in.

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