The Dog When The Bell Rings 2/2

[sanginmychains]

Part 1 is here

Comments

[mcparrot]

Wow, what an amazing story. That one was a true rollercoaster, up down and sideways, sometimes all in one sentence. The hotness, was amazing, the awkwardness was wonderful because it made this story so different from the usual "aliens made me do it" genre.
Cleverly and written, in character even when the characters where going out of their heads, and frustrating as hell.
Well done.

[sanginmychains]

I'm kind of addicted to the thought exercise of, "what if I took a cliche genre and did it FR SRS?" I'm thinking of a telepathic mind link fic next. Also a genre usually played for cheap smutty thrills, but really? hearing someone else's thoughts would fuck. you. up.

Not that cheap smutty thrills are a bad thing.

[mcparrot]

Cheap smutty thrills are not a bad thing at all, but it was the fact that this wasn't that really elevated it from hot to smoulderingly hot.

[hab318princess]

I'm not one for long comments, but this was a great story, so many layers and just gorgeous.

[sanginmychains]

Thank you!

Pavlovian

[caledonius72]

I loved this, it could have just been smut!fic and sexytiems with the boys. But it was so much more, a real character study piece, little snippets and gobbets about who all four of them are, and how they behave under and not-under the influence.

Have you considered posting this to ninja_teaboy?

Re: Pavlovian

[sanginmychains]

Thank you! I'm kind of going through my own little cliche bingo here, playing a game of "what if I did an AMTDI, but serious?" A bodyswap, but for real? I'm toying with the idea of doing a telepathic link fic in the same tone.

Not that there's anything wrong with "just" smut!fic. There is no bad when there's porn.

Okay, that's not true. But I'd say that smut is /always/ a good startign point, at least :-)

Posted to ninja_teaboy, thanks for the tip.

[eumelia]

My heart is pounding.
Such great characterisation! Great dynamics, oh man, that was so great! the scene between Jack and Gwen and Ianto's thoughts on it was just too good.
Really, spot on regarding that trio.
Martha is a sexy bonus.

Well done! Fucking A!

[sanginmychains]

Jack and Gwen are great to write. So much pulling them together, so much keeping them apart. Mostly, themselves, and for good reason, but that doesn't mean they won't play the edge sometimes.

Thanks for the compliment!

[aviv_b]

Well done! Smut with real plot. A great story, I think you got the characters just right.

[sanginmychains]

Not that smut without a plot is a bad thing, but yeah, it's more fun to do when there's more substance.