More Richer than my Tongue, Chapter 2

Jul 13, 2008 11:18

Title: More Richer than my Tongue - Part 2
Rating: This section PG-13, spots of NC-17 overall
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Notes, credits: Huge thanks to my betas invisible_lift ,who saved me from my punctuation tics and helped untangle my POV furball, and blackbird_song, who fussed over my show vs. tell balance and also worked on the furball. That POV thing is a bitch. Much ( Read more... )

more richer than my tongue, jack/ianto

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nhym July 13 2008, 18:48:39 UTC
Oh, traditions :) I know about those

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sanginmychains July 13 2008, 20:48:42 UTC
Nothing like a good device to get some kissing going.

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christine_twfan July 13 2008, 18:50:26 UTC
This story is absolutely beautiful! I really can't wait for the next part.

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sanginmychains July 14 2008, 14:10:28 UTC
Thank you!

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nightporters July 13 2008, 18:50:38 UTC
Another excellent chapter. The conflict of feelings is well observed.

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sanginmychains July 13 2008, 20:48:58 UTC
Thank you!

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sefkhet July 13 2008, 18:52:04 UTC
Jack is not your lifeboat, you fool.

Oh, you foolish, broken, beautiful man. He IS. You just have to LET HIM BE.

I want to wrap this fic up in cotton wool and squish it. It's gorgeous.

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sanginmychains July 13 2008, 20:49:32 UTC
that's how I feel about Ianto. I'm torn between wanting to pet him, keep him safe, and feed him bonbons, and hurt him hard, because he's so gorgeous when he's all broken.

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wenlyn530 July 13 2008, 19:01:49 UTC
Awwww, that was sweet. Awaiting for the next one. Thanks

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sanginmychains July 14 2008, 14:11:59 UTC
Nothing wrong with a little sweetness, to leaven the overwhelming bitterness. Heh heh.

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