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sanginmychains

More Richer Than My Tongue, Part 4

Jul 19, 2008 22:41

Title:More Richer than my Tongue - Part 4
Rating: R
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Notes, credits: Betaed by invisible_lift and blackbird_song. All quotations are from King Lear.
Summary: This fic is my exploration of the Jack/Ianto relationship post-Cyberwoman. The boys have some issues, to say the least, so I sent them away from the world, stuck them in a tent, and rained on them ( Read more... )

more richer than my tongue, jack/ianto

Comments 48

nhym July 20 2008, 06:13:07 UTC

Oh, bitch bitch bitch, Ianto!

demotu July 20 2008, 06:15:31 UTC

Ahhhhhh, okay, I really loved this fallout. Tetchy Ianto and bewildered Jack and I think this line was my favourite:

Several hours, a shower, and a three-piece suit usually did the trick and allowed him to carry on without examining anything too closely.

Nice! And also the image of Ianto with unbuttoned jeans. Mrow.

More, please?

sanginmychains July 20 2008, 06:18:27 UTC

Dude, go to bed! More in 3 days. Much, much more. This was just the overture.

I agree with you on the yummy morning-after Ianto. All warm and creased and sticky, oh yes yes, nom nom. And since this is fic, I can pretend that hungover camping woobie smells like warm sawdust and sunshine.

thrace_adams July 20 2008, 06:19:38 UTC

Oh damn, someone woke up on the wrong side of the tent LOL. Great update, the tension between them is just exquisite. Looking forward to more.

sanginmychains July 22 2008, 04:30:14 UTC

Thanks so much. They're both just pulled as taut as bowstrings, so much fun to torment.

kerryblaze July 20 2008, 06:30:27 UTC

Finally got around to reading this and I'm so sorry that I waited so long. Excellent characterization and kudos on the angst. It's done very well. True to life and very masculine.

sanginmychains July 22 2008, 04:31:48 UTC

Thanks a lot, that's a huge compliment. There's an unfortunate tendency to feminize the guys in slash, and it's not like I don't fight the urge to have them talk about their feelings and stuff, but they're really a lot more satisfying when they're acting like men.

mr_mrs_faxsea July 20 2008, 07:31:32 UTC

so I sent them away from the world, stuck them in a tent, and rained on them.

This line pulled me in to reading this series. Well beside the fact you wrote it. And I loved really loved everything you wrote so far.
And I adore this story. It is so true to life.
But damned the waiting in between chapters! Arch!!
This is going to be 3 long days...

-S-

sanginmychains July 22 2008, 04:33:00 UTC

Heh, so you like the genre of "author tortures characters for sadistic good times," eh? Excellent. Stick with me.