The gaps are unsightly, ragged boulders in a calm stream that their mutual pride in perfection would never allow, and if they could see each other’s eyes they would talk and talk of inconsequentials until the rocks had been worn away and carried as sand down to the sea. But the telephone flattens their vowels and adds an extra electronic layer between what they say and what they mean, giving just enough distance to let the silence stand until one of them casually mentions a paper that they have to write, or an especially demanding problem set that’s due tomorrow, and the other gratefully follows his lead in the polite conventions of leave-taking.
The pure imagery!!! This paragraph just made me MELT. I had to stop and read it out loud >___> :: has been melted to goo :: How does one learn to write like this?! Your writing style is amazing. *__*
And, poor Yagyuu's suffering from Niou withdrawal.
I'm sorry I had to comment again, I re-read it and I'm so fucking in love with it. I want to cry at how much it affects me. Reading your works makes my heart pound and ache at the same time.
Just like he’s supposed to, perfect son perfect student broken partner, and his guilt is so strong he half-expects Niou to be there when he raises his head, staring with heavily lidded golden eyes and a vampire smirk.I love your writing. I love your writing and I can't bring myself to say anything else because my love is overflowing at the moment, once more, and every single time I read this fic, these words, that love is renewed. The way you describe things... I am breathless and I want to cry because it's so good and your writing makes me feel so intensely because the way you write is so intense. I know they're just words, I know it's just data across the screen but when I read them and see them laid before my eyes, it doesn't seem that way at all, it feels as if you're bringing words to life, characters to life. D1 TO LIFE. It's mostly Yagyuu
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....Tennis no Oujisama FANFICTION?!?! I never knew.
It's that crazy kid you know, by the way. That one that likes to dance and do strange things, the one that can do NARUTO hand seals with freakish accuracy? Yeah, you know who I'm talking about. Friend this account, because I use it to comment on LJ, not being motivated enough by far to maintain an LJ myself (and anyway my webskillz are so poor that I couldn't make it as pretty as yours).
Hell, I don't even remember what user picture I have up...Well, whatever. I'll check later.
So, yeah. I should do the Japanese homework before Nakamura-samurai-sensei kills me dead, Kill Bill style. Oyasumi.
Heeey there! 8) I stumbled over this just now - and I know it's from 2004 but I can't stop myself from asking anyway.. - is there any more of this story? anywhere? I really liked it so far ^__^;
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The pure imagery!!! This paragraph just made me MELT. I had to stop and read it out loud >___> :: has been melted to goo :: How does one learn to write like this?! Your writing style is amazing. *__*
And, poor Yagyuu's suffering from Niou withdrawal.
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Yes, he is, a really bad case of it too....::pats Yagyuu:: poor thing.
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Just like he’s supposed to, perfect son perfect student broken partner, and his guilt is so strong he half-expects Niou to be there when he raises his head, staring with heavily lidded golden eyes and a vampire smirk.I love your writing. I love your writing and I can't bring myself to say anything else because my love is overflowing at the moment, once more, and every single time I read this fic, these words, that love is renewed. The way you describe things... I am breathless and I want to cry because it's so good and your writing makes me feel so intensely because the way you write is so intense. I know they're just words, I know it's just data across the screen but when I read them and see them laid before my eyes, it doesn't seem that way at all, it feels as if you're bringing words to life, characters to life. D1 TO LIFE. It's mostly Yagyuu ( ... )
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It's that crazy kid you know, by the way. That one that likes to dance and do strange things, the one that can do NARUTO hand seals with freakish accuracy? Yeah, you know who I'm talking about. Friend this account, because I use it to comment on LJ, not being motivated enough by far to maintain an LJ myself (and anyway my webskillz are so poor that I couldn't make it as pretty as yours).
Hell, I don't even remember what user picture I have up...Well, whatever. I'll check later.
So, yeah. I should do the Japanese homework before Nakamura-samurai-sensei kills me dead, Kill Bill style. Oyasumi.
~ Yuuki Kugatsu
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Didn't you know? Nakamura-sensei's maiden name is Ishii.
Also, friended. :)
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I stumbled over this just now - and I know it's from 2004 but I can't stop myself from asking anyway.. - is there any more of this story? anywhere? I really liked it so far ^__^;
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