Sasuke Fic 3

Mar 23, 2008 21:16

It hit him fast and it hit him hard. The sudden wave of loneliness engulfed Sasuke as he stood out in the downpour, waiting for his fellow team Hebi members to return. Even after so many years on the run, searching for him, Sasuke was still prone to bouts of feeling. It was getting better though, and he knew it. Slowly but surely, he was becoming ( Read more... )

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Awww... lecanis March 24 2008, 04:35:58 UTC
I wanted to cry for Sasuke here! He's usually not a favorite character of mine, but you wrote him so well here!

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Re: Awww... sangomeister March 24 2008, 08:39:44 UTC
Thank you so very much. haha I guess a lot of people don't like Sasuke but I'm glad you were willing to read it! ^^ ♥

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istne_pieklo March 24 2008, 13:35:04 UTC
This is beautiful. Very emotional and heartbreaking despite its shortness. Loved this ficlet very much! ))

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sangomeister April 4 2008, 19:25:40 UTC
thanks! ^_^

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cascadingiris March 25 2008, 22:59:44 UTC
Sasuke was, is, and will always be one of my favourite characters.

This fic was painfully gorgeous--you seem to be able to crawl under his skin and feel each raindrop hitting him. I applaud you!

I loved it. :)

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sangomeister April 4 2008, 19:26:25 UTC
haha I know! He's the greatest...

thank you so much!!! ♥

btw I just watched shippuden and couldn't keep my eyes off his awesomeness!! ;p

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