P!atD, "Snake Bite"

Oct 24, 2007 13:48

Last night, at an unreasonable hour, I offered to write 100 words for deliberatehips to cheer her up. 1218 words later ( Read more... )

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sangredulce October 28 2007, 06:16:19 UTC
Wow! What a wonderful response to get. I'm very flattered. Thanks so much for reading!

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redbrickrose October 26 2007, 14:55:51 UTC
This is wonderful! I love your Brendon.

He sets out alone. He's of hardy pioneer stock, he thinks. His is a manifest destiny, pushing borders and boundaries ever further. He was very good at Oregon Trail II.

Hee. Yes. And I love the ending.

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sangredulce October 28 2007, 06:17:30 UTC
Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this, so I'm really glad that was conveyed.

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cyclogenesis October 28 2007, 21:55:08 UTC
Oh man, that was lovely. You bring such a great feel to them, and you write a great Brendon - I'm really excited to see more from you.

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sangredulce October 31 2007, 03:27:43 UTC
Thanks very much! They're so much fun--I admit I was quite nervous about the whole real people in real time aspect, but it seems to be working out. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

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belle_bing October 31 2007, 11:20:46 UTC
This is so perfect. I love it.

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sangredulce October 31 2007, 18:52:54 UTC
I'm so glad! Thanks!

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janet_carter October 31 2007, 14:26:41 UTC
Hee, Oregon Trail II! Oh, Brendon - this was delightful.

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sangredulce October 31 2007, 18:53:18 UTC
a.k.a. the Best Game of All Time. Thanks very much for reading!

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