In The Midst of Life [H/W, NC-17]

Feb 14, 2010 15:42

Title: In The Midst of Life
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes
Pairings: Holmes/Watson
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 1318
Summary: Watson is trying to live, Holmes would rather be dead - a little death seems to be the best compromise.
Warnings: None, unless I am required to warn for lack of a plot or gratuitous use of commas.
Disclaimer: I didn't make ( Read more... )

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storyfan February 14 2010, 06:27:28 UTC
The is beautifully lyrical. Thanks for posting this. Just the bedtime story I required.

Good show.

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sanguineheroine February 14 2010, 12:08:28 UTC
Sweet dreams, and thank you for commenting.

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soliandxpyne February 14 2010, 06:50:33 UTC
Mmmm. :) I have to agree with the first comment, this was gorgeously worded and flowed seamlessly. I loved the imagery and symbolism in this, AND THE SEX, fabulous job, thanks so much for sharing this!

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sanguineheroine February 14 2010, 12:09:55 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad it flowed. I got to the paragraph before the sex and flailed for about fourty-eight hours.

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lelek February 14 2010, 07:03:26 UTC
Oh, this is lovely. I adore beautiful phrasing and yours is stunning. It's excellent work, really class.

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sanguineheroine February 14 2010, 12:10:24 UTC
*floored*

Stunning? Thank you!

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saintsalvage February 14 2010, 07:11:06 UTC
FFFFFFFFFF. As always, I love this. The role reversal of body and mind when they are together is such an interesting switch, but so fitting. And as always, your words are absolutely exquisite ("ruinous topography" particularly stood out).

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sanguineheroine February 14 2010, 12:14:40 UTC
My blushes, darling, and thank you for singling out some of those words - I love knowing what grabs people's attention.

More than that, I love getting such glowing feedback from someone who created the stone cold MF Holmes blowjob.

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kataren February 14 2010, 07:12:48 UTC
Wow. Wow. I may have drooled a bit there near the end, but yeah, wow.

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sanguineheroine February 14 2010, 12:15:36 UTC
Drool is welcomed, encouraged even.

And OMG a triple 'wow'. Very kind of you :)

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