I like it, it's a bit disjointed but that feels like it's the main idea behind it, like we're in Clint's shoes trying to understand what's going on. The end I'm reading in a few different ways and none of them are probably right, but no matter how I read it it's pretty amazing.
Thanks, that was exactly the feel i was aiming for when I started to write it. I actually did leave it a bit open ended so that whoever is reading it can draw their own conclusions.
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I actually did leave it a bit open ended so that whoever is reading it can draw their own conclusions.
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