A character study

[sanityfaerie]

Comments

[naol]

Whew.

Disturbing? A bit sad, perhaps, but understandable in a way. I'm jealous of how well this works.

[sanityfaerie]

Well, there's a balance there. On my side, I'm still struggling with writing stuff of any length, and I'd ask you to be fair to yourself. You've hit the poetry sweet spot yourself a time or two. As for being disturbing - for some folks it is.

Thank you for the feedback.