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[fic] Ecology of the African Savanna, chapter four

Mar 15, 2009 20:02

Title: Ecology of the African Savanna. Chapter Four: The Emergence of the Elephant
Pairing: Koyama/Shige/Ryo, and good ol' Pi thrown in somewhere.
Author: ezyls_girl .
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Profanity, certainly, and mentionings of drugs and lubricant. Yamapi is involved. XD.
Summary: And so the predator lunges.
School!AU, and Shige-centric.
Notes: Late 'cause I' ( Read more... )

%humorstyle, %romancestyle, *koyaryoshige, [school!au], %angstyle, !fanfic

Comments 40

fairy_illusions March 16 2009, 07:35:45 UTC

Oh this chapter was absolutely lovely~
Not in the sense that Shige gets mauled by Ryo (well sorta) and he signs Koyama's death away to Ryo. Shige wanted the best for Koyama, but I guess this "best" was, ironically, his demise.

Oh Shige.... (and ill!Koyama)...~ &hearts

And Pi. A well-versed drug dealer. I love it!!! lol

I still absolutely want to squish you for being so interesting. Like employing all these school concepts that make my head spin class into a story and making them interesting. Very awesome approach~

Can't wait for the next one :D

ezyls_girl March 16 2009, 13:36:58 UTC

Yes, mauling does tend to get in the way of things. XD.

*is squished* You must know by now that I'm just incorporating random ideas into my fanfic from school? Seriously. We were studying Euripides the other day and I imagined Pi talking about deus ex machina. And here we are. Not very original, no. XD.

Thank you so much for reading -and loving- my fic. You make my day, you do. :D

fairy_illusions March 18 2009, 00:49:20 UTC

No no! Very original. I don't think I've EVER seen Pi-chan mention deus ex machina. You're actually making me want to go to english class gasp XD lol jk

Honestly I reread all the chapters you had (oh and I saw your fic index and know who's talking/pov is next XD whoops) and now I'm all ehhh is this RyoShige KoyaPi or KoyaRyo and ShigePi or is this just everyone is alone. whoop-de-doo? <--- I know, I should just be patient and sit and wait. D:

n_n can't wait for you update haha (obviously XD)

ezyls_girl March 18 2009, 04:49:44 UTC

You reread them? All of them? =O
Oh, I love you. Really. XD.

Did you catch any mistakes?

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ununoriginal March 16 2009, 16:32:08 UTC

oh shige... good intentions for all the wrong reasons. lovely imagery :)

ezyls_girl March 17 2009, 05:08:31 UTC

Thank you. We can all agree that Shige's more book-smart over street-smart. XD.

vinyaromeniel March 16 2009, 17:18:45 UTC

I still love your snark. Because even if you're alternating between random and perverted things. It's still snark. And Ryo snarking around is always good. And I somehow love the flow between Ryo's and Pi's snark. It's something different.

Okay enough about snark.

I love this. Still. I love you for writing this.

*flails*

ezyls_girl March 17 2009, 05:09:28 UTC

Is it? I feel like I've been deflating. They sound extremely twisted. XDDD.

And I love you for loving this. n____n &hearts

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ezyls_girl March 17 2009, 05:10:43 UTC

T____T Poor Shige. So selfless.

Why don't you pray that the drug dealer'd help him cheer up? In the less-obvious way, of course. XD. Thanks for commenting~

rea_irixyu March 17 2009, 02:16:59 UTC

“Not before I rise from my coffin and strangle you! No deus ex machina for you, my friend.”

-giggles- Oh, lovely, ezyl-dear. The only thing wrong is that I want to shout "MORE"

And hush, your snark is awesome, okay? I was totally trying not to burst out laughing because my dad and uncle are in the same room. XD Perversion and randomness is the definition of type n of Rea-love. XD

O_O Shige, Shige, Shige. What have you done now? 8D So that's why there was the "You promised!" vbhfdgvfd And to think Ryo. Would. Do. That,f sdughdhafgh

And you know, I'm totally grinning like crazy now that I get what the fuck you were talking about when you said you'd keep Yamapi in a grave. XD Yamapi as a drug-dealer. Holy Pi, now that's unexpected. XD

<3 Love you, update soon so that I love you more? XD -shot-

ezyls_girl March 17 2009, 05:17:35 UTC

I don't think I'll ever let him out of the grave. It must be very comfortable down there once Kei tries to visit. OMUSPOILERS.XD

Well, since you all consider it to be snark, I'll have you know that I wrenched this chapter out with extreme difficulty. "XD. I was debating on whether or not to add jerking-off to a photo of the Grand Canyon in, but decided against it because it was just too complicated to explain.

PI AS A DRUG DEALER PREVAILS. 8D