This is the prologue(s) and first chapter of something I'm writing based off a long-running roleplay with yashy. No yaoi content as of yet, but it's coming in the next few chapters
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I like this chapter, it definitely piqued my interest. The prologues were interesting, they give a really good insight into the personalities of the characters. I liked your descriptions of Hueco Mundo, they really set the atmosphere for the story. It's interesting how Kira immediately feels sympathetic and responsible for Grimmjow - they do have things in common, both of them have been betrayed... Thanks for writing, I'm definitely going to read the rest :)
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The prologues were interesting, they give a really good insight into the personalities of the characters. I liked your descriptions of Hueco Mundo, they really set the atmosphere for the story.
It's interesting how Kira immediately feels sympathetic and responsible for Grimmjow - they do have things in common, both of them have been betrayed...
Thanks for writing, I'm definitely going to read the rest :)
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