Happy Santa_Smex, Hikaridonya!

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[worblehat]

This was really cute. I loved the dialog and the way you wrote Ryoma especially. And Momo cracked me up so much:

"Oh, sorry, Echizen," Momo says. "I can't hang out tonight because I'm out with my girlfriend. Did I tell you about my girlfriend?"

Ahaha. Him bringing Kaidoh along was pretty funny as well. Good interactions throughout! Very enjoyable. :)

[venivincere]

UWAAA!!! This is darling! I really love your Ryoma, still so sassy but all grown up. Atobe seems perfect, too, like in these lines:

"How is it?" Atobe asks.

Ryoma puts it down on the bedside table. "Not as good as I remember."

"Nothing is," Atobe says. "Except me."

Excellent work, mystery author!

Cat-cam, heh.

[leviosa8]

Futureverses usually make me so sad, as does the fashion world. Atobe as Ryoma’s agent, heh. Unless there is this sexual attraction between them, I can’t see Ryoma selling his body and obnoxious soul this way. And Nanjiro seems to have gone from bad to worse, what about the mother!? This smells of family “drama”. Hmmm

[hikaridonya]

Thank you so much for writing this for me, anon. And especially an Atobe/Ryoma fic! It's still my OTP after so long, and I love seeing fic for them ♥

The whole thing was incredibly cute, the cat-cam especially. And I adore seeing them all grown up, and just as contrary as always. I was impressed at the inclusion of Momoshiro too -- and his 'girlfriend.' And Atobe's full-of-himself, but often not serious comments. Gah, love :)

Thank you once again!

[hikaridonya]

:)

[nivell]

Love how mysterious Momo's "girlfriend" is...and the ending was awesome. Karupin!