Hahahahahaha, oh man - I loved the ending! So great.
This was a fun fic! I liked the way you brought them together - it felt like a subtle transition. The part where Tezuka drops his racket really stuck out to me as something simple that evoked a lot of feeling. ...Hopefully that makes sense.
He tries not to blush too hard when, as soon as he's within earshot, Momoshiro asks him why he looks constipated.
Momo is so amazing in any fic where he has a cameo, ahahah. Ryoma blushing is cute, too.
Seriously, a fun read! I'm glad you picked this pairing to do, because I think you did it in a new way. ♥
The way they finally get involved beyond tennis seems cold and disapassionate, but it works wonderfully with these two! Nice way to end it, too.
I like the Seigaku reception to Ryoma in High School, and the way he keeps obsessed with Tezuka, after so many years and in spite of his victories abroad.
And how I wish to know what Inui discussed with Tezuka about "the intricacies of body language". :D
AHHHH I really liked this, anon. :) My first favorite part was: he bumped into Kaidoh around the corner after making a quick exit when Inui asked him, "Can you cough for me too?" LOL. I know they were little parts, but the stuff with other-Seigaku-people interactions was really fun. xD Momo especially.
And this part made me all butterfly-y and happy: "Yes," Tezuka exhales, and he kisses Ryoma. Awww, Tezuka, you don't even realize when you're being a sexy old gentleman, do you?
WHEEEEEEEEE!!! Santa, you must love me very, very much because this is just perfect. *chortles with glee* This is just exactly what I wanted and I can't thank you enough for this wonderful fic! But first, I have to apologize to you for not replying sooner -- we're at the end-of-year paperwork crunch at work and my son had a major English project due, which we worked on like gangbusters until almost 1 AM yesterday, and I just haven't had time to come look at the comm.
So, so many lines made me laugh or smile or grin like a silly thing. I'm going to quote some of my favorites back to you:
"This is just like old times, except you're not as bratty."
"Stop touching me, senpai," Ryoma mumbles. AHAHAHAHA! That's just so perfectly Ryoma! It's a good think Momo's blind to much of his brattyness. :-D
after making a quick exit when Inui asked him, "Can you cough for me too?" *snorfle* I got a vision of Inui coming at him with a finger cot.
The MomoKai side-fighting made me giggle. "Whatever, asshole. Buchou would never do that
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This was a fun fic! I liked the way you brought them together - it felt like a subtle transition. The part where Tezuka drops his racket really stuck out to me as something simple that evoked a lot of feeling. ...Hopefully that makes sense.
He tries not to blush too hard when, as soon as he's within earshot, Momoshiro asks him why he looks constipated.
Momo is so amazing in any fic where he has a cameo, ahahah. Ryoma blushing is cute, too.
Seriously, a fun read! I'm glad you picked this pairing to do, because I think you did it in a new way. ♥
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and of course Dan and Akutsu being there made my day.
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The way they finally get involved beyond tennis seems cold and disapassionate, but it works wonderfully with these two! Nice way to end it, too.
I like the Seigaku reception to Ryoma in High School, and the way he keeps obsessed with Tezuka, after so many years and in spite of his victories abroad.
And how I wish to know what Inui discussed with Tezuka about "the intricacies of body language". :D
Good job!
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And this part made me all butterfly-y and happy: "Yes," Tezuka exhales, and he kisses Ryoma. Awww, Tezuka, you don't even realize when you're being a sexy old gentleman, do you?
Great fic, anon! ♥
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So, so many lines made me laugh or smile or grin like a silly thing. I'm going to quote some of my favorites back to you:
"This is just like old times, except you're not as bratty."
"Stop touching me, senpai," Ryoma mumbles. AHAHAHAHA! That's just so perfectly Ryoma! It's a good think Momo's blind to much of his brattyness. :-D
after making a quick exit when Inui asked him, "Can you cough for me too?" *snorfle* I got a vision of Inui coming at him with a finger cot.
The MomoKai side-fighting made me giggle. "Whatever, asshole. Buchou would never do that ( ... )
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