This is one of those problematic stories that are so damned good that one does not know where to start commenting, much less where and when to stop. OK, I'll make an effort.
I like this pairing and I have seen how it usually works well, so I was kind of positively predisposed. But I can get easily disappointed with silly, random details and OC inclusions and strange behaviour and stressful compulsions, and yet somehow you managed to avoid any nasty surprise and turn every plot device into a delicious ingredient = EXCEEDED EXPECTATIONS.
I doubt everybody else in the team is so het and into het pr0n as they want the rest (specially Inui, who matters more because he keeps track of them all) to believe, but it was also fun to see them interested in girls for a change (regardless of how that should be the natural thing, of course) -the first of all, Kaidoh. I can totally picture him panicking like that. I also like to think of Kawamura as het for me, all shy and nice and courteous but curious about hentai like any respectable boy his
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I doubt everybody else in the team is so het and into het pr0n as they want the rest (specially Inui, who matters more because he keeps track of them all) to believe, but it was also fun to see them interested in girls for a change (regardless of how that should be the natural thing, of course) -the first of all, Kaidoh. I can totally picture him panicking like that. I also like to think of Kawamura as het for me, all shy and nice and courteous but curious about hentai like any respectable boy his age (I just wonder if he owns a computer...). However, I can't help thinking that Kawamura is just trying really hard to erase the image of himself embracing another man from Inui's mental picture of what a Kawamura date would be like.I really dislike stories where everyone is gay all at once so I try to avoid that. And I've been influenced by H2 -- I just loved all the stuff with Hiro and Noda and the porn and trying to watch girls in the lockerroom
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oh wow. I NEVER EXPECTED THIS PAIRING. and IT'S EPIC. and making good use of canon details too, like their dabbling into photography (though for Inui's case, purely business). and confused!Inui... alsdkjfdslfjkj
While personally, I sportscrush on Andy Roddick, reading about Inui's mancrush on Rafaeal Nadal was a pleasant and enjoyable surprise. It's so nice to read about tennis in Tenipuri fic, and this hot the spot oh so well!
Kaidoh and his girlfriend were utterly adorable. &hearts
I like you, while accurate, is just too sentimental. I would like to experiment sexually with you, while also accurate, is probably not socially acceptable--> Best line I have read in ages. Oh, Inui! ;)
Thank you so much for sharing this fic with us, author-san! It was an unusual pairing and you did it more than justice with this piece!
Oh man, that was excellent. :D So clever and so witty and so perfect. I loved Kaidoh's date and Inui's fan and Sakamoto's little mutant dolphin. Fuji was delicious and Inui was...well. Inui was Inui. Marvelous fic, mystery author.
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This is one of those problematic stories that are so damned good that one does not know where to start commenting, much less where and when to stop. OK, I'll make an effort.
I like this pairing and I have seen how it usually works well, so I was kind of positively predisposed. But I can get easily disappointed with silly, random details and OC inclusions and strange behaviour and stressful compulsions, and yet somehow you managed to avoid any nasty surprise and turn every plot device into a delicious ingredient = EXCEEDED EXPECTATIONS.
I doubt everybody else in the team is so het and into het pr0n as they want the rest (specially Inui, who matters more because he keeps track of them all) to believe, but it was also fun to see them interested in girls for a change (regardless of how that should be the natural thing, of course) -the first of all, Kaidoh. I can totally picture him panicking like that. I also like to think of Kawamura as het for me, all shy and nice and courteous but curious about hentai like any respectable boy his ( ... )
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thumbs up!
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Kaidoh and his girlfriend were utterly adorable. &hearts
I like you, while accurate, is just too sentimental. I would like to experiment sexually with you, while also accurate, is probably not socially acceptable--> Best line I have read in ages. Oh, Inui! ;)
Thank you so much for sharing this fic with us, author-san! It was an unusual pairing and you did it more than justice with this piece!
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Kaidoh's one chance for heterosexual love in my fic. I hope he makes the most of it!
Thank you! It's so good to know that you enjoyed it.
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