Oh wow! Anonymous, I'm very sorry that I didn't reply to this until now but wow. What a great story! I don't know Pirates of Penzance at all, except for that it has a Pirate King but not knowing the musical didn't matter considering the skill with which you wrote this! I'm really impressed!
The thought of Inui acting is a great one! I love how Inui so seriously announced Kaidoh's acting debut role is Pirate #3. (Why was Kaidoh cast? Was it out of fear or did Inui do some quick talking?) And I really liked the following line:
"I like the part where you pretend you're really doing the math," he adds with a smile.
Ahahahaha, pretending. Sure, Kaidoh, sure. And the sex bits were wonderfully done too! All in all, a great story. I can't wait to find out who you are, Anonymous!
I'm so glad you liked it! And I'm sorry you didn't know Penzance - I was hoping you would but had no real way of SUBTLY finding out. I would have loved to write you a One Piece-esque TRUE pirate AU, but I was afraid I didn't know the One Piece verse well enough to pull it off. :/ Still, I'm glad you enjoyed anyway. ♥
I really should have been more clear about why Kaidoh was cast. T_T I was mostly thinking poor Megumi was terrified into casting him for fear of getting beaten up. That, and maybe the other girls in the drama club thought he was cute and begged Megumi to sign him up . . .
Haha, right, pretending. You should know Inui better than that by now, Kaidoh.
Aww, how cute! I loved the whole idea of this, and Kaidoh's characterisation.
Everyone starts applauding, and for the first time, Kaidoh doesn't feel like hitting any of them.
AHAHAHAHAHAH. So great!
"You should breathe with your stomach," Kaidoh says, surprising them both when he touches his fingertips to Inui's abdomen. Aware of his growing blush, he pullss his hand away and quietly adds, "I hear that helps."
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The thought of Inui acting is a great one! I love how Inui so seriously announced Kaidoh's acting debut role is Pirate #3. (Why was Kaidoh cast? Was it out of fear or did Inui do some quick talking?) And I really liked the following line:
"I like the part where you pretend you're really doing the math," he adds with a smile.
Ahahahaha, pretending. Sure, Kaidoh, sure. And the sex bits were wonderfully done too! All in all, a great story. I can't wait to find out who you are, Anonymous!
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I really should have been more clear about why Kaidoh was cast. T_T I was mostly thinking poor Megumi was terrified into casting him for fear of getting beaten up. That, and maybe the other girls in the drama club thought he was cute and begged Megumi to sign him up . . .
Haha, right, pretending. You should know Inui better than that by now, Kaidoh.
Again, I'm so happy you enjoyed! ♥
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Everyone starts applauding, and for the first time, Kaidoh doesn't feel like hitting any of them.
AHAHAHAHAHAH. So great!
"You should breathe with your stomach," Kaidoh says, surprising them both when he touches his fingertips to Inui's abdomen. Aware of his growing blush, he pullss his hand away and quietly adds, "I hear that helps."
This was really cute, too. Great job! ♥
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