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sap1066

Read My Mind

Mar 30, 2007 19:25

Title: Read My Mind
Pairing: Nine/Rose
Rating: Adult
Content: Graphic sex; Angst; Romance.
Chapters: Complete
Disclaimer: The BBC owns the rights to these characters.
Summary: It started with a no. Not many things do.

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Comments 19

nina_ds March 31 2007, 16:32:07 UTC

I am sorry that you are depressed...but this was lovely. It did make me cry, and it was sad (no canon-based Nine/Rose story can really avoid it), but in a kind of lovely, inevitable way. Loved...hated/loved...the last line.

I hope you feel better, but we are reaping the benefit. Would writing something mechanically funny help lighten your mood?

sap1066 March 31 2007, 19:03:40 UTC

I was sooooo depressed about Five and a half hours, I got it all out of proportion. This is an old story that I wrote in January. The ones I have written since 5.5 have the most stupid plots I could think of, on purpose.

gorgeous... kmom93 April 6 2007, 15:29:59 UTC

Amazing inner monologue, so touching. I'm sorry you're so sad, but this writing is a beautiful way to express and release it, no? And I LOVE how for him it's months and months between the two TARDIS apprearances at the end of "Rose," not just seconds. Brilliant! We just re-watched that over the weekend and his face at her first refusal was withering. The second time, he keeps the door open to... yes. :-D
kmom

chrissy1302 April 8 2007, 23:32:09 UTC

*cries* Beautiful story!

boy_named_susie June 18 2007, 03:50:41 UTC

Beautiful and sad and bittersweet. Your writing style is amazing.

sap1066 June 18 2007, 18:00:06 UTC

Thank you, but I'd probably go with morbid rather than amazing. Try First Kiss, Last Kiss if you want something similar to Read My Mind, but I wouldn't bother with the rest because you probably won't like them.