Comments | sapphicwarrior: AU fic: Without you... (15/20)

sapphicwarrior

AU fic: Without you... (15/20)

Dec 02, 2009 16:51

TITLE: Without you…

AUTHOR: sapphicwarrior

PAIRING: Callie/Erica

RATING: NC-1. warning: there is domestic abuse in this story!

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fanfiction, au, without you, callie/erica

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sapphicwarrior December 2 2009, 16:28:37 UTC

the triangle isn't over yet. And Erica telling Callie who she really is, isn't happening until the end. I'm currently writing that part now. Lots of things still have to happen.
Glad you enjoyed this update :D

avenavs December 2 2009, 18:20:11 UTC

Anna is a cool mom!:D

I'm seriously hurting for Erica. All her withdrawal from Callie and her FBI responsibilities was cutting her into her core.

wonderful update!:D

sapphicwarrior December 2 2009, 18:22:59 UTC

I like Anna too :).
Erica will hurt more in the next parts...
Glad you enjoyed this update :D. Thanks for reading and commenting!

walking_weapon December 2 2009, 18:48:55 UTC

so i just gotta say that i love callie's mom! i hate that erica is through having to see callie w/ jason etc. curious to see how she'll cope and wht she'll do about the case. keep it up :)

sapphicwarrior December 2 2009, 18:52:26 UTC

glad you liked the update :D.
I like Callie's mom too, she was fun to write.

walking_weapon December 2 2009, 19:15:21 UTC

i bet she was fun to write. wish i had one :P

smewmaw17 December 2 2009, 19:49:05 UTC

oh how i hope everything works out in the end for these two!!

sapphicwarrior December 4 2009, 17:58:25 UTC

I hope it too! Thanks for reading and commenting :D

iluvcallie December 3 2009, 04:07:42 UTC

So I read this first thing when I woke up. I love starting my day with a good Callica story. So thanks for updating so quickly.

That being said, argh! I get so happy when they are moving forward and loving each other. I got so spoiled with the last 2 chapters. Then, the other shoe drops and they are apart. It's really great storytelling and very compelling, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending for these two. I believe it's coming, but why can't they get it right. I love Callie's mom talking some sense into her though. And I love that she recognizes the positive impact Erica has on Callie.

I just love this story! It's definitely one of my favorites. Great job.

sapphicwarrior December 4 2009, 17:57:47 UTC

Thanks for the nice comment :D!
They seem to move two steps forward and one step back, I know. Just be patient a bit more...