My mended heart

Mar 10, 2005 06:28


You are the sweetest thing and you know it,
shyly smiling ot reveal glittering diamonds,
smooth, moonkissed gold, you are pure elegance.

Ah, my little one, you are as feminie as an open rose,
so much more than I will ever be,
with your soft, gorgeous curves.

Yet its not your eye-catching appearance
that causes me to treasure you,
instead I covet what you ( Read more... )

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bearspirit March 13 2005, 22:32:28 UTC
gahh thats beautiful

as i said before to the startingness of this.. i loved the wording..the rhythem is fantastic..and the caring through symbolism..is so emininet
it shows how much you love him

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hey hun vanilafrijoles9 March 16 2005, 12:45:30 UTC
hey its beanie and i just wanted to say that i love ur ode its sooo pretty jk love ya!!

~*~Bean~*~

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Re: hey hun sapphireshards March 16 2005, 14:42:38 UTC
Thank you !!

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