[One Shot] Second Chances

Sep 03, 2013 01:00

Title: Second Chances
Pairing: Yongguk/Himchan, Yongguk/Lizzy bc yay crackships
Genre: light angst(?), romance
Word count: 5.1k
Rating: PG13 - to be safe
Summary: Sometimes, a second chance is saying goodbye.
A/N: for habamut for thebrowniebunch second fic exchange! First attempt at Banghim, and I don't know if this was what you were looking for but I hope I did okay! ( ( Read more... )

character: himchan, character: yongguk, character: youngjae, character: daehyun, genre: angst, group: bap, length: one shots, pairing: banghim, genre: au, genre: romance

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habamut September 3 2013, 18:41:55 UTC
don't deem yourself unworthy - i'm a nobody, really. and i did enjoy it! i like the way you used my prompt, i love my angst and i love it a lot. thank you! <3

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sapphirewings15 September 4 2013, 03:13:25 UTC
but all the fics posted so far were so goooooooooooood ;___;
i'm glad you're happy with it though! I have never written anything so long and i really don't know how i managed to bs my way through this one. :')

thank you so much for reading ;u; and leaving such a lovely comment ^^ thank you for the awesome prompt!

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bictory September 3 2013, 22:09:28 UTC
CRIES NO WHYYYY but Banghim are so married ;~~~~; your descriptions are really pretty, and sigh Yongguk looks good with any girl, really, and he'd treasure her ;___; so the fact that he's the one getting married just hurts even moreeee. But good job on making both the old relationship and the new one believable! And for pointing out the fact that people really do change despite the firm desire not to. And I forgive you for breaking apart Banghim ;n;

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sapphirewings15 September 4 2013, 03:17:32 UTC
cries shhh banghim are secretly married i mean lookit them so ghei it hurts :'(
my descriptions are awkwardly cheesy sometimes but-- thank you so much! ;u;
i knowww and he seems like the kinda guy who would just love the one he's with and make them his whole world and never ever cheat and even be gentle as fuck when they break up ughhhh YONGGUK PLS. T^T

I'm so sorry, it hurt me just as much writing this, sob. I tried!1! :') i could've gotten so much more out of the prompt but sighs this is what i get for slacking. :'(

/hugssss// oh thank you, now i just need to forgive myself too;;;;;;;;;;

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Round Two is officially over! livejournal September 15 2013, 12:50:35 UTC
User haneyon referenced to your post from Round Two is officially over! saying: [...] Jongup is Jongup, and neither of them trust the dictionary. Himchan/Jongup. NC17 ♫ Second Chances [...]

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jongbuttbutt September 23 2013, 07:06:28 UTC
I AM HERE~ I really don't know where to start... I'll just start with the end-

"Sometimes, saying goodbye is the second chance we need."

I think I'm a sucker for endings that summarise the title beautifully and this did exactly that ;A; It's like the final blow to my already pained and dying heart. It's so poignant yet painful and I like how the storyline wasn't overly complex which left lots of room for angst. Bittersweet angst... So painful... So very painful... I have no idea how to describe the feeling I got from this, it was like... an elegant heartache. Not too obnoxious, just right, you know? I'm probably not making sense. hmm...

And how they're forced apart by circumstance and how moving on seemed like the only ways just seems so real. Like not everything's dandy and sweet and how they accepted it in the end just makes this whole fic really work for me<3

I'm sorry I can't properly expressed the feels you've given me in this comment ;A;

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sapphirewings15 September 24 2013, 05:43:58 UTC
oh m-- when you said expect a comment I didn't expect perfection like this ;u;
but /welcomes you with open arms/ hi cupcake!

Oh thank you so much, i was so afraid the ending/near-ending would be sort of.. unrealistic, idk. I can only imagine ((barely)) how Himchan would feel to see this, even though his feelings for Guk have sort of simmered down ((obviously))
I don't knowww I wasn't very satisfied with this and I'm still feeling rocky about alot of the time frames and stuff but-- welp. Shh don't cry? /mends your precious little heart/ bittersweet, yes.

Elegant heartache tho hahahahah you're too much I can't :'( it makes sense!
In one sentence: shit happens, suck it up and move on. ;~~; thank you again, for liking it and reading it and reacting so awesomely sob. <3

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