Serpent

[sapphyrestar]

I staggered up the stairs of a succulent courtyard as if I were irreversibly intoxicated. The luminescent sunbeams poured into my sun-sick eyes, which caused the rustling verdant leaves to subsist as an incessant shapeless blur. Before my eyes were able to fully adjust to this mystification, my ears were pierced with the most deafening and shrill

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[twisteddaydream]

Damn woman! And you tell me you can't write. I swear, I think every time you say that, I'm going to point you to this. It is powerful and evocative, slow paced, yet moving quickly the introduction of the serpent. There is pain and apathy, a rolling mix of emotions that is mind-blowing.

[anonymous]

Not sure if you'll notice this, but wanted you to know I miss you. I've tried to message you a couple of times on MSN, but I guess it didn't go through or something. Anyway, just wanted to say hi. ~hug~

[twisteddaydream]

That anonymous comment was me, Brekke. Durr. Forgot I wasn't logged in on this browser. What a dork am I?