New Fanfiction Dark secrets of Sara Sidle

[sara_willows]

Author~~~ Sulas Matros Rosario

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Ok Tabby, here's my honest comment (from GothicMaryP)

[anonymous]

All in all, a fair read, it was a little sketchy to be honest. You have good ideas and bubbling creativity that claws to come out, however, I think the blunt/sketchiness of your writing style ruins your actual story. Other than that, keep going - now you’ve got me curious!