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sarah32314

Oct 13, 2009 01:43

I am haunted by a girl ( Read more... )

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betterspeak October 18 2009, 10:09:03 UTC

Sarah, did you write this?? I like it.

sarah32314 October 18 2009, 16:23:57 UTC

I did! Any help editing it , let me know LOL...I'm starting to think 'hollow memories' should be 'hollow, empty spaces' que piensas?

betterspeak October 20 2009, 19:05:31 UTC

Good self-edit, I was thinking "hollow memories" was a bit less strong than the rest. I dunno what else. I still like it...lol...

sarah32314 October 20 2009, 19:56:25 UTC

Yes memories doesn't even rhyme with the second line which is what I seemed to be doing with the rest of it...Oh boy :-/