More ideas than fiction.

[sarah_sinclair]

Definately establishing this one as a working journal not for polished presentation. Yet, I think it has redeeming features

Comments

[eunuch_dreams]

Well I, at any rate, thought that was a vast improvement. You caught the words quite beautifully (particularly the rather wonderful vein of description you used at the beginning); the only trouble is, once again, a slightly uncertain voice

[sarah_sinclair]

Oh, never fear I have no intentions on the Somerset, you can have it, I'm chasing the Bridport. But, on a serious and less facetious note, all of those are right, I'll just go fix them.

Thanks,

Sarah