Room 39

May 04, 2006 12:10

The first time I entered the Daschund building I was intimidated by everything in sight. From the moment I walked through its gold rimmed revolving doors I felt dirty. All around me marble floors glistened like some expansive, untouchable lake. For the briefest moment I considered skirting the lobby’s borders; afraid I would be consumed by one of ( Read more... )

Leave a comment

Comments 2

eunuch_dreams May 5 2006, 01:31:44 UTC
Sarah, this is an absolutely wonderful piece of writing. It's so pure; everything fits perfectly. If this piece was mine, I'd want to shout about it ( ... )

Reply


Very Nice cristyissues May 6 2006, 03:20:15 UTC
I love the fact that your writing is so subtle. If your not careful you miss it and then the rest of the story sort of stops. I can honestly say that I have read this 4 times now, and I'm still dumbfounded. You and Jonah are returning the hope that I had lost in writers. Thank YOU!

Reply


Leave a comment

Up