Superior? Updated

[sarahaless]

Ok so because Sotia ssddgr has quoted me in MBwF and her Beta the lovely dragonflylady77 went and read Superior? on the strength of the quotage I thought I better fix it cos it REALLY was a mess. So yes I went back and fixed the FIRST FIC I EVER WROTE!!! And now it's all done I have the urge to share it again! I think it reads better now.

Comments

[dragonflylady77]

"Spike you don’t breath, you’re dead remember" *looks at you funny*
I love it even more now! I could see a bit you tweaked at the beginning re Holden Webster.
Please don't shoot me for the email I sent you last night... *pleads with you*

Oh and the icons, I got some from dawnofme and I asked and she said I could take some of hers (like the naked Spike one)(and you have to give credit when you take some I was told) and she made me some just for me with pics I emailed her.

Oh and I'm only temporary beta for Sotia.. ;)

*hugs*

[sarahaless]

Why look at me funny?
And yeah I tweaked a lot of bits which just felt clumsy when I read it back, Webs being one of them.I think I got them all but I'll probably read it tomorrow and find more!

Course I'm not going to kill you for the email!I'm also, not at this point going to go back and fix any of my older fics, though I may have to fix what you sent cos it'll bug me now - you're/your is actually one fo my pet peeves and I can't believe I did it so many times!!!

If I'm honest I'd have to confess that a lot of the time in the past I've been so anxious to get chapters out that I was quite lax about the spelling/grammar etc. Hopefully won't be a prob in anything I write from now on though!

Cool I shall contact Dawn about icons - just feel like a change now and again!

Must sleep now - work was exhausting! Night night (or whatever the hell time you're at!)
Sarah
x

[dragonflylady77]

Look at you funny cos the verb is spelled 'breathe' ^_^
I think you should contact Dawn and ask her. She's so nice and helpful!
Good night!
Lauriel
xx