The Little Things Give You Away, 1/1

[sarahbell05]

Title: The Little Things Give You Away
Character(s)/Pairing: Ethan Lovett/Kristina Davis
Rating: T
Word Count: 404
Challenge: #76 - Jealousy
Summary and/or Authors Notes (if applicable): Ethan's jealousy gets the better of him.
Warnings (if applicable): None

Comments

[rtruffles]

I hope that we see this on the show!!

This was great!

[summerofsoaps]

This is great! You capture the chemistry between them well. I hope we get to see something like this on the show. The only concrit I would have is that you start out in present tense in the first paragraph and then switch over to past in the second.

[lairdonot]

Terrific work! This is the type of information that should be shared around the web. Shame on the search engines for not positioning this post higher!