If he had managed to squeeze in a couple more authors' names in your second example, it could serve as written comps for a graduate English curriculum.
It's only tough if you're not Jeff Simon. PLUS, he managed to squeeze in one of his parenthetical sidebars in the same 'graph! His skillz are dazzling and you should show more reverence.
It's best not to let writers like Jeff Simon get to you. Put it this way, you're reading the Buffalo News not just clipping its coupons- he should be flattered!
I hope all is well with you and everyone, I miss all of you- a lot! Maybe we can Skype over Thanksgiving? I think that would be awesome.
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I hope all is well with you and everyone, I miss all of you- a lot! Maybe we can Skype over Thanksgiving? I think that would be awesome.
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