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May 11, 2004 02:35

this is a very rough unrefined copy of a poem i wrote tonight.

My heart dissolves
Like Sweet n' Low
Swirling silt in a coffee cup
Spiraling into some murky abyss

Drink my chemical soul
This dubious sweetness tastes best;
A shrouded toxicity
Enveloped in pink
Harmless in moderation
A confined cancer
Waiting to happen.

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wow anonymous May 23 2004, 11:26:53 UTC
great metaphor, yo.
had to read it a few times to get it.
-M

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