Comments | sarahpayne: Fic: What am I meant to be? (1/?)

sarahpayne

Fic: What am I meant to be? (1/?)

Feb 20, 2011 11:01

Title: What am I meant to be? (1/?)
Pairing: Zayn/Harry
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Zayn had never really wanted to be like this, a seemingly vain and concieted brat.
Author notes: my first fanfic on here, please tell me what you think, just short so I know to continue or not (:

Zayn was sitting on his bunk on the boys tour-bus flicking through his mentions ( Read more... )

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Comments 17

acting_out16 February 20 2011, 12:43:10 UTC

Aw poor Zayny, struggling with his feelings. He should just tell Harry how he feels!
Great start, can't wait to read more and so happy that more people are writing Harry/Zayn, can't wait for more :D

sarahpayne February 20 2011, 12:55:38 UTC

Yeah poor Zayn! He only half knows what he feels rn, by the end of this i have a feeling he will be even more angsty than Liam, not that i WANT to torture him of :') thank you! Just short to see what people think but more Harry/Zayn love was desperatley needed :D glad you liked!

beautyofit February 20 2011, 13:41:50 UTC

I like how you've portrayed the situation. I've got a feeling all is not how it seems to Zayn though, with the Louis/Harry situation. He shouldn't jump to conclusions! Silly boy ( ... )

sarahpayne February 20 2011, 15:06:22 UTC

Offend me? Dont be silly! If i'm being honest i nee all the help i can get and the fact tht this is my first slash fanfic and was written on my iPod doesnt help matters either but thanks for pointing This out and i'll keep it in mind for the next chapter! :D x

beautyofit February 20 2011, 15:14:27 UTC

haha Yeah Ipod typing is a bitch!

Glad I didn't offend you <3

evolvedimbecile February 20 2011, 14:49:45 UTC

Yes, the world needs more Harry/Zayn! This is a good start, I'm looking forward to more :D

sarahpayne February 20 2011, 15:31:01 UTC

Teehee thank you (: this is short but hopefully next time i'll be writing on the computer so i can put my grammar ninja hat back on :D and yes the worod really does need more Harry/Zayn! :D

sashapotter February 20 2011, 15:34:25 UTC

Aww, poor Zayny. His jealous feelings over Lourry are so sad. The end made me want to hug him. Hopefully it will get better soon.

I love how you in co-operated his Twitter whoring self with the fact that he's just trying to escape his feelings for Harry.

Please continue, this is amazing. I absolutely adore Harry/Zayn. <3

sarahpayne February 20 2011, 15:47:09 UTC

Yeah, I can see Zayn actually being like this I have no idea why. I want it too get better soon but i alsi want a decent length fic (: thank you so much! :D