Comments | sarahpayne: We're drifting, over the edge.

sarahpayne

We're drifting, over the edge.

Dec 28, 2011 22:05

Title: We’re drifting, over the edge.
Pairing: Liam/Louis (unrequited) Harry/Louis.
Rating: PG13
Warning: Angst. Mentions of suicide.
Summary: For Liam, he is destruction.

Title taken from Fall - Ed Sheeran.
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liam/louis, one direction, louis/harry, fic

Comments 7

xxlita91xx December 29 2011, 04:50:29 UTC

I have no words for this. It's beautiful and sad at the same time. The way you have written it really makes you feel everything that Liam is feeling.

sarahpayne December 31 2011, 01:12:55 UTC

Thank you! I was worried about this actually cause I haven't written for a while, but I wanted to get something out there.

xxlita91xx December 31 2011, 02:44:43 UTC

You didn't need to be worried at all. When you can write something that is this beautiful when you haven't written in a while, you know that you have talent.

aidensfan January 10 2012, 15:41:13 UTC

This is really beautiful, it pulled at my heart strings and I could really feel sorry for Liam. How could Louis do that to him :(

You write really well and I hope you write more in the future x

sarahpayne January 10 2012, 22:27:05 UTC

Wow thank you! I just decided that the world didn't have enough angsty, abstracty LiLo.
I've started what I think will either be a Larry or a Zouis, so there might be some more up soon! X

merlin_beard April 21 2012, 18:35:58 UTC

This was BEAUTIFUL. But also so incredibly heart breaking that I feel like If I don't get a sequel here I might throw 500 knifes through my heart.
Because OW.

sarahpayne April 21 2012, 22:17:53 UTC

Oh wow, thank you!:D Gah, sequel. Maybe. Maybe-ish. I want to now though, I'd almost forgotten about this. I'm far too easily tempted. ^.~