Save me...Again

[sarahsezlove]

Title: Save Me…Again
Author: SarahSezLove
Pairing: Luke and Noah
Rating: None
Beta: None
Warnings: None
Word Count: 222
Summary: Luke saved Noah once.
Prompter:: ritalaura2000
Prompt: I save you again like the last time.
Tagging: Moongirl
New Prompt: Don’t look now, but…

Comments

[valenti1965]

This poem totally sums up Luke and Noah's love story. So beautifully written. Great job! Loved it Sarah! x

[sarahsezlove]

Thanks Louise.
You know I could never do any of it without your support and friendship x

[jeri_1116]

You stared through me.
And I could see you’d moved
beyond…away.
Left us behind.
No more to say.

OMG! Sarah! This was so good. Very beautiful BB. :)

[sarahsezlove]

Thanks, Arsena.
That means a lot :) x

[wheelie47]

That was truly beautiful, Sarah! I'm always in awe of people who can write poetry and you chose every word perfectly. It captured them and their emotions beautifully.

Luke saving Noah again with a kiss. Excellent use of the prompt.

Loved it!

[sarahsezlove]

Thanks, Anne.
To be honest, I just didn't have the time to write anything longer, and I didn't want to pass again.
Apart from the couple of haikus I posted in Nukefic a while back, I've never written any poetry. The 'I let you go' stanza just sort of popped into my head and I built it up around that.
:)

[gzbby1866]

oh it was just heart breaking , you told their story so well

[sarahsezlove]

Thanks, Gabby :)

[newhaven183]

Wow...simply wow!

[sarahsezlove]

Wow!! Thank you x