For Counterpane:

[sarahtothe3rd]

Tell me what you guys think about this, because I'm thinking about submitting it to Counterpane.

Therefore I Am

I smell of coffee beans, stale perfume and crumpled paper.
Blistered fingers crumpled the paper
And now the purple night seeps into wrinkles under the eyes.
The stacks of water-stained books beautify and captivate.
Clean sheets stain

Comments

[nerdy_leo]

I like! If I had any kind of constructive criticism (not that you asked specifically for CC, but you know.. just throwing it out there) it would be the and's at the beginnings of those two lines could be left out, but it sounds fine the way it is!