Alright, I've got one more for you guys. This one needs some work. So PLEASE make editing comments if you can. This story is a little bit longer, but it is more of a story than the last one was. And while you are commenting, tell me if it makes sense, if it's too choppy, if it flows or ... you know the stuff.
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“This is Tommy, I’m not around
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