Habanera

[saraid]

Title: Habanera
Author: saraid
Artist: glasslogic
Fandom: Supernatural
Pairing: Sam/Zombie!Dean
Rating: Explicit
Word Count: 7,098
Warnings: incest, general grossness.
Disclaimer: not mine, don't own, can't touch.
Summary: Sam will never give up his brother
A/N: this is all glasslogic 's fault. she tempted me. i'm so glad she did. beta'd by doug_the_peep, aka my loving husband

Comments

[culper355]

Oh, goodness! This was dead-on brilliant. The banter was perfect! I do love me some bantering, bickering boys, it's when they are the most them, the most Sam and Dean, together, and you captured it perfectly! And all the little tender moments between them, just melted my little heart! Also thank you for inserting some logical zombie maintenance elements in there (I actually loved the way you dealt with Dean's ability, or inability to digest food!), especially when pairing it with hilarious detachable penis incidents XD Not much of a bottom!Sam person, but this was so delightful (in the most traumatic way possible, sorry boys -_-')I couldn't help but be charmed by it! Bravo/Brava!! Thank you for incestuous zombie love (at this point it is pretty much cannon!). Cheers!

[saraid]

"detachable penis incidents" - oh, i love that! i'm really glad you like it - i don't often write anything funny. i kind of wonder what'll happen when dean wants a beer...

[glasslogic]

*laughs* Okay. That was awesome. And horrible -- exactly as promised! Great job and perfect for this challenge. I think you should consider a sequel *grins*

[glasshouses]

ZOMG! (Get that clever use of the Z?) hee.

That was sweet, yet creepy. Sexy and...creepy. The stuck dick was genius :-) as was better mental health through being undead.

[saraid]

i often think being undead would contribute to my mental health... who says zombies aren't lucky? i tried to make it as creepy (and gross) as possible so i'm really glad you liked it!

[jackien1968]

I'm not much into zombie stories, but the art post intrigued me.

This is a great story! I was crushed when it ended, I wanted it to be twice as long.

"Why couldn't he reach it? Sure, his dick was longer than his fingers, but he'd only broken off part of it." Completely hilarious and completely gross. Silly Dean, that's why you can't reach it, the part you would've been able to easily grab is still attached to you.

Thanks.

Jackie

[saraid]

I appreciate you giving the story a chance and even better that you liked it! I know Dean wasn't quite thinking clearly, but apparently being more emotionally open hasn't lessened his attachment to that particular body part. It's not like they ever expected anything like that too happen!

I am considering a sequel. I had so much fun writing this one and I'm pretty sure I can top myself in the grossness factor. I mean, Dean's dead. He can't really eat - what's gonna happen when he wants a beer?

[tebtosca]

I have no idea what compelled me to read this (I'm not a zombie person) but I'm so glad I did because I totally loved it! They were both so in-character, even in such an extreme AU situation. I love the tone of it, how you have this humor and schmoop balanced out with the knowledge that they are pretty much completely fucked up. And Dean's dick breaking off is both hilarious and horrific at the same time LOL.

Great job!

[saraid]

I know, dean's dick - as soon as I thought of it I knew I had to write it :) I was aiming for awesome and horrible and I think I hit it pretty well. And yes, they are so completely fucked up. I love 'em that way. Thanks for reading!