The Kiss (Part 3)

[ftitsumo]

     JongHun sat quietly in thought as his fellow band members laughed and joked in the kitchen. HongKi seemed truly happy but, occasionally, he would cast a look of concern at JongHun. JongHun sighed. He wanted to celebrate with them but he couldn’t think of anything but the sound of that one bad note. It was as though all of his feelings for

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Oh my goodness.

[kou_mi_rien]

What, no comments? I would've expected differently. But yay, I'm first! =D

Anyway, I loved this so much. The emotion seemed very real and everything about this fic was just perfect. <3 I loved it. Great job.

Re: Oh my goodness.

[ftitsumo]

thanks for commenting! i'm so glad you like it! you make me want to write more ^_^

Re: Oh my goodness.

[kou_mi_rien]

Yay! Good! Write more. I want to read it. ♥

Great!

[anonymous]

Really really excellent! You closed the story very well and I love the way you describe the feelings.. the dialogues... everything!! Do write more! :) Thank you.

[tea_spiller]

it's adorable! Written so beautifully!!
I enjoyed it so much! thank you for writing this!! <3

I like the way you write!!!!!!! Great job!!

so beautiful! :)

[anonymous]

hy! wow your story is really touching! i just love the pairing and your ending is just wonderful! :) thank you soo much for this story! keep writing! the length of the story is perfect and the words you chose brilliant! hope 2 read more from you soon! Bye, Denise