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Jun 11, 2008 17:39

I wrote this from an english prompt. we had to include certain phrases into a orginal piece of writing.

“I lied to you.”
His dry mouth closed and opened, once, twice. He shifted his weight between feet, absorbing the news. Until finally, he spoke, barely enough for her to hear but still straightforward, “That’s the first honest thing you’ve said to ( Read more... )

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allie_claire June 12 2008, 00:08:35 UTC
something corporate.... nice choice.

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susan_elizabeth June 12 2008, 21:29:12 UTC
kid, like seriously, you need to be a best selling author like tomorrow.

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theironuterus June 13 2008, 03:14:10 UTC
I almost was moved to tears

you are so cool.

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sararedinger June 13 2008, 03:42:17 UTC
and so are you, rad kiddo.

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legra45 June 13 2008, 03:49:12 UTC
sara this was great. you are a VERY talented girl :)

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sararedinger April 1 2009, 01:18:14 UTC
this is overdue, but thank you girlie.
love you forever.

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kaylarocksyasox June 16 2008, 02:17:04 UTC
Wow. Sara, this is amazing. You are so talented.

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