Comments | sarasusa: Hikaru no Go, 3 x 100

sarasusa

Hikaru no Go, 3 x 100

Nov 07, 2005 22:15

In which I drabble my way recklessly into another fandom ( Read more... )

Comments 4

issen4 November 8 2005, 06:19:14 UTC

Whoa. This is grand. An Isumi and Waya fic that isn't cutsy. I like the way you tie in the importance of Go and how they're supposed to progress.

Someday I'll tell him why.

For some reason, that made me really happy.

lilacfield November 8 2005, 06:56:27 UTC

But a cicada doesn't climb back into its old shell. Isumi's only choice is to fly.

My favorite lines. Very Isumi-ish.

kay_cricketed November 15 2005, 06:28:14 UTC

Isumi/Waya. *babbles incoherently like the fangirl she is* Oh, but you've written them so well.

You have such a lovely, almost dreamy writing style. It's really addictive. I was sad when the drabbles ended, but you closed them off with such meaningful moments that I couldn't imagine them going any farther without losing their charm and power.

The end one, actually, is probably my favorite. Just... amazing.

ontogenesis July 25 2007, 14:02:19 UTC

Wow, these are really insightful and suited for these characters. Very good elucidation about how they developed.

I particularly liked these lines:

But a cicada doesn't climb back into its old shell. Isumi's only choice is to fly.

Realization hits Isumi--Waya has learned boundaries.

Afraid of the weak spots that aren't visible on the board.