Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-?x?

[sarcasm_chan]

hey there,
here is the first chapter of my new fic ^^ (for those who accidentally read the intro, which I deleted later, this one is the intro but then like 7 pages longer ^^;)
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!
!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!

Title:  Brothers of the Sword
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, some dramatic stuff and some manxman things ^^ english

Comments

[cry2me_yourwish]

i like i like..u have to continue to write ^^v..

[sarcasm_chan]

thank you =D I will ^^

[golden_kimono]

I like it, although I was surprised by the time period. I usually don't read stories that are in the past, but since I liked your other stories I thought I'd give it a try. A few small grammar mistakes, but they didn't bother me.
I actually didn't expect Reita to be the lord, for some reason Uruha was in my head at first. No idea why. :P Anyway, I'd like to read the rest. ^^ Oh, and I don't think it's too long.

[sarcasm_chan]

thank you ^^ I am glad you tried my story even though you did not like the time period,
oh about the grammar mistakes: m(_ _)m sorry, but my English is just too bad T_T
lol, i can understand you expected Uruha to be the lord, he has some flair that makes you think he's royal more soon then that Reita is, but I thought of something else for him >D
*smile* good ^^ but though i think next chaps will be shorter...XD;

[golden_kimono]

Oh, I don't really mind the time period, it's just that it usually scares me off in fanfics. Not this time, though. :P Other than that, I love to read about it (in books, for example).
Haha, it's not that bad. :P Minor mistakes, nearly everyone makes them.
Yeah, Uruha is more elegant I guess (well.. a little), but when I found out it was Reita I read it again and then I could see him as a lord as well. Now I'm curious as to what/who Uruha is going to be.
That's alright, long, short, I don't mind, as long as there'll be more chapters. ^^

That was a weird comment, I hope you can understand it. ^^;

[sarcasm_chan]

lol don't worry, i understood ^^
It was a nice comment =D
*smile* well I am happy you liked it =D Renaissance and dark ages are my most favourite parts of history, (you can see very clearly how humans fuck it up to fix it again in the next 500 years...if you get what i mean XD;;)
yeah well Reita isn't much of a lord anymore ne? since he left the place XD;
Oh what Uru and the others will be in the story? >D you'll see >D
*smile* there will be, though it will take a time I'm afraid ^^;;

[yumegari_chan]

how can you hate it >w< i really liked it! XD
I was so intrigued about who was the lord but then it was like gfruehfw!
It's a nice story <33~ and I wanna see if there are more characters and pairings *w*
go go! ganbatte!~

[sarcasm_chan]

lol thank you =D
I still am not convinced but I will continue ^^
lol, well mmore characters: doooh, read the title: I have to introduce like half of gazette, almost entire A9 and Miyavi is also not tehre yet ne? XD;
and about pairings: just to make sure: no ReitaxRuki! just other pairings which will come up soon...^^

[livingdeadbunny]

You did a great job on this fic! It's very engaging and the way you wrote it feels like a lil' bit of 'the last samurai'...hehe^_^
Another chapter? Pweeease?

[sarcasm_chan]

thank you ^^ I am very happy you liked it =D
*grin* never saw "the last samurai"...so I have no idea XD; I was actually afraid it became too much like "lord of the rings" but it's not fantasy XD;
lol yeah as soon as it is ready I'll post it ^^

[pokky4ever]

Yay!! I like this already!!
is Uruha and aoi coming soon? and kai too... ahhaha nice fic!

[sarcasm_chan]

yes they will appear soon ^^
lol thank you =D I am very happy you liked it ^^