Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-?x?-chap 3/?

Mar 25, 2007 12:33



hey there,
here is a new chap of my new fic ^^ Sorry for taking such a long time, and please: ignore the weird chaptertitle thingy XD;;;;
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!

!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!

Title:  Brothers of the Sword
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, some dramatic stuff and some manxman things ^^ english is not my mother-tongue..
pairings: ?x ( Read more... )

nao, fan-fic, aoi, brothers of the sword, reita, tora, kai, saga, uruha, miyavi, sarcasm_chan, gazette, hiroto, alice nine, ruki, shou

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sarcasm_chan March 26 2007, 14:05:36 UTC
m(_ _)m I'm sorry i took so long, four will be ready way more soon.
but was it worth waiting? X.x

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sarcasm_chan March 27 2007, 16:05:03 UTC
.....XD;; now you're being vague...^^;;;
what ya mean? X.x

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pokky4ever March 25 2007, 23:43:25 UTC
... I really wonder who is this beloved someone to aoi... and I hope he will find him soon!
and... where is uruha..?? ;__;
but nice chapter anyways!

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sarcasm_chan March 26 2007, 14:10:56 UTC
happy you liked it despite Uru still missing, but good news: he appears in the next chapter >D then I ahve FINALLY introduced ALL characters ^^
you'll see ^_~v thnx for commenting =D

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ryuutsuki March 26 2007, 21:23:02 UTC
Gah! A fight! @_@

Eheh...a whole lotta action in this chapter. I like it. ^-^

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sarcasm_chan March 27 2007, 15:59:57 UTC
*smile* thank you! =D I was afraid it could be boring, so this is nice to hear ^^ X3

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buuberry March 28 2007, 18:27:35 UTC
-squeals- i finally read all 3 chaps! heh.

hrmm you do leave alot of mystery in this fic. but i think its interesting. diff roles, diff time frame, diff characters! whee! heh. now i know why you take so long to finish a chap. so much details. i think its pretty hard to write something your not familiar with.

-huggles- i'll be waiting for your next chap! -excited- its unfolding pretty well!

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sarcasm_chan March 29 2007, 10:32:07 UTC
*smile* thank you =D
I am happy you liked it, all of teh chaps. At least, I assume you did ^^;
did you? x.X
anyway: thanks for teh comment! Yeah I do ahve a lot of mystery in this one, well...XD; I hope it won't get boring or something, I wanted to try something new ^^;
I'll finish four as soon as I can ^^
*huggles*

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buuberry March 29 2007, 12:08:57 UTC
of course i enjoyed all 3 chapters dear. haha.

nods. it is a nice change from the usual story plots. nah its not boring. at least for me. i like the knights eras! gives such a grand feeling. heh.

i'll wait for chapter 4! -huggles-

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yomi_chan March 31 2007, 15:59:01 UTC
Oh my, oh my ... Shou and Reita fighting ... *shakes head*
But well, Shou insulted Reita, so I can understand him.
Well whatever.
First it was a bit confusing for me to get into it again, but I managed and enjoy the chapter as well as I do every time ^-^
(Don't even DARE to say, that it's crappy >>)
And since I love the middle age, I definitely love the plot and the 'actors' *hahaha*
Keep on writing my dear <3
*gives you cookies and a piece of the strawberry cake I made*

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sarcasm_chan April 1 2007, 08:44:00 UTC
yummie! Cookies AND strawberry cake =D *munch munch*

I am very happy you liked it, despite my opinion about it that I won't say out loud cause you'll kill me >D
(I suddenly have the feeling my life won't last much longer after you read this)

I will! As soon as I know how to continue part 4, I will continue part 4!
(that quite makes sense right?I already wrote half of it btw...but now I am a bit out of ideas...suggestions?)

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yomi_chan April 1 2007, 15:01:13 UTC
*hihi*

*sigh*
Whatever, but I still like your work, even if there are some mistakes, but they don't catch someone's eye that badly and I think, your style did improved a bit. ^^
(*ehehehehe* >_>)

*nod* Makes sense.
(Hm ... we could make that shaking-words-out thingy again >DDDD)

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sarcasm_chan April 1 2007, 15:05:01 UTC
My style improved? what you mean? ^^ (nice to hear, but just mean; what did improve ^^;;)

"(Hm ... we could make that shaking-words-out thingy again >DDDD)"
O.O;;; I guess my memory fails me again this time, but I have actually no idea what ya mean T^T ^^;;

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