Brothers of the Sword- fan fiction- gazette/ alice nine/ miyavi-ToraxUruha, MiyavixSaga, Sa-chap 6/?

[sarcasm_chan]

hey there,
here is a new chap of my new fic ^^ please: ignore the weird chaptertitle thingy XD;;;;
!! I hope you'll enjoy!!
!!PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS!!

Title:  Brothers of the Sword
author: Me..? Sarcasm_chan
warning: well, some dramatic stuff and some manxman things ^^ english is not my mother-tongue..
pairings: ToraxUruha, MiyavixSaga, Sagax? (mentioned

Comments

[nakashi]

Another great chapter ^^. Ruki should be more careful with Kai.. you never know what hides behind that smile. I feel sorry for Tora, Uruha is being way too mean to him, Tora has the right to be jealous. Again another cliffhanger.. it's not nice to leave it there! (See, I didn't call you mean!)

[sarcasm_chan]

yosh yay thanks! =D
*grin* well, Ruki will find out eh?
hmm yeah maybe, but Tora also is behaving like an ass, and Uruha is kinda stupid when it comes to Toras emotions...he just doesn't understand what is "wrong" with Tora, so that's why he takes it the wrong way and gets mad. ^^;; quite sad for Tora though...
(no now you called me: not nice >.> ^-^;v)
thanks for the comment ^-^v

[juusuikan]

wow.
This is good *_*

[sarcasm_chan]

wow! =D thanks! =D
but..did you read the other chaps or not? ^^;;;;;;; *forgot*

[juusuikan]

Haha I did no ^^; Yet, that is.

[sarcasm_chan]

but how can you understand it then? XDD it's actually a quite complicated story XDD

[seungjea]

* gasps *
we finally got the chance to see aoi's past!
and it's soooo sad!
>.<~ poor aoi!! no wonder he's always so quiet and sad ... (but it made him look so damn cool though ...)
and ... now i know why he's after saga
POOR TORA!!
he's like a big jealous kitty cat ... awww ... uru should be nicer to him ... be nice to tora, uru!!! >.<~ i like them together, pls let them stick together! uru is like a queen who got poor tora wrapped around his little finger.
more to come? hopefully so!

[sarcasm_chan]

yeah ^^ Aoi si quite sad eh?? *just overread it, maybe i have been too mean for him...well who cares?? XDD*

lol well...you see Uruha doesn't understand Toras emotions and feelings, he did not know he actually HAS them (as in: Uru did not notice Tora really fell in love with him) so don't judge too hard on him... ^^;;
and of course more to come X3 I'll finish this fic >D (thoguh that will take a few more chaps...)
thanks for commenting ^-^v

[seungjea]

^^ you portrayed it quite well ...
will you write about each character's past like aoi's?
will there be more chapters????
i am hooked!
^^

[sarcasm_chan]

lol, it was Sagas point of view about Aois life, that was teh reason why it was put down so neutral XDD;;
lol no this quite were all characters ^^;; otherwise it will get TOOOOOO complicated XD;;
and from some characters you don't have to know the past anymore: like Reita and Ruki, Uruha is also not necessary and Tora's life was actually quite normal up till now XD;;

[ahega]

yeah~ Kai! But not the scene which I hoped for lol

[sarcasm_chan]

*grin* I enjoyed this comment so much XD I like it when you write your thaughts straight down XDD

[kagenanashi]

Just read all the chapters in one go, it's really good!

But now I feel bad for Aoi and Miyavi...

Update soon!

[sarcasm_chan]

whoah I did not expect you to read this O.O;;
but thanks XDD
I think it is true crap and my worst fic up till now XD;; but really thanks you =D

and why feel sad for Myv? oh hang on cause of Saga of course...
^^ I'll try ^-^v
thanks for commenting and reading =D (I say thanks too much >.>)