The Fifth Season

[sarcasm_chan]

title: The Fifth Season
genre: Comedy/drama
Chapter: 1/? (intro/try-out)
Summary: The four brothers, Shinji, Yuuji, Koji and Toshi all deal with their own and each others problems. Shinji, as the oldest sees it as his task to take care of the three younger ones, against any price.
While the three older brothers (have) become adults, the youngest one

Comments

[nakashi]

Okay so we have the cutest little boy ever, a player, an artistic guy and a shy guy... I think I like Shinji the best and Koji the least xD.
I loved the scene with Toshi and his imaginary friend, so cute :3. And >I loved how you described Yuuji's hair *_*.
I really like the idea and I still adore your writing *cuddles* ^^
FIRST COMMENT *yosh*

[sarcasm_chan]

hahahah XDD yeah that's quite the point. I made someone else fall in love with Koji, but she first saw him (I have drawings ><;;) then read how he was, she still loves him XD
Shinji? I expected you to like Yuuji best to be honest XD
*cuddles back* THANK YOUUU!!! ...so...shall I post it somewhere else, adn if yes...where? O-o;

[nakashi]

Why Yuuji? o_O okay he's adorable and I like his hair and his personality is nice too... stop trying to change my mind!
Hmm I don't know any places where you could x-post .__. but if you find some place, you should!

[sarcasm_chan]

hahaha well cause of those mentioned reasons I guess XDD;; he is a bit more your type I thought. XD Shinji is more the overprotecting father-like one, Yuuji is...an artistic dork really XDD with sarcasm !

hmm well first some more people should read it I guess... if already hardly anyone on my F-list likes it, other won't like it either ne?

[iina_hime]

Ohmy, I love your (fan)fics! :D I can read this chapter/introduction over and over again and still laugh about ”Do girls slap like this? DON’T THINK SO!” xDD Gomen, but I like that line. I like the whole fic and I'm waiting for you to get done with the second part! :D
(and gomen, ne, for this "lameass" comment. xDD I got nothing to do, so... xD Gomen!)

[sarcasm_chan]

HAHAHA no problem dear <3

XD and yay X3 I am still glad you liked it. Still in love with Koji? ^--~
and don't apologize, comments are love <3

[iina_hime]

YES I AM!! O___O :DD He is like... Wow! <3 *drools*
I'm starting to like Toshi to now. :P He is so cute with his detective-talk and Mr. Goldhair and Mrs. Breakheart. xDD

YOU ARE LOVE! <33

[sarcasm_chan]

ahahahahah XDD *petpet*
hmm yeah Toshi is a cute little boy ^^

awwwwww *squee* ^------^ <333

[sarcasm_chan]

*lol* yup the good news part was funny XDD

And I know my grammar stinks XD;;; but well... I'll try to watch it!

The characters will get described better in all ways, physically and mentally, so if you decide to continue reading it when I post another chapter you will find out more about them XDD
But if you want to I can describe their looks for you here..? it will be put down a bit...more straightforward if you get what I mean XDD

^--^ yay! I am gald you commented, really! X3 *huggles&