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Of Love and Friendship - NC17 - Chlollie- Part Twenty-Six (2/2)

Nov 11, 2010 15:51

Title: Of Love and Friendship
Category: Smallville
Genre: Friendship/Romance/Humor/Action/Drama
Ship: Chloe/Oliver
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 6,408
Spoiler(s): 6x04 - Arrow
Summary: (AU) Chloe Sullivan grew up in Star City, California with high hopes of becoming a Pulitzer Prize winning reporter, but destiny has other plans. Finding a best friend in ( Read more... )

novel - smallville - chlollie, author: sarcastic_fina, ship: chloe/oliver, fic: of love & friendship

Comments 28

vamp1987 November 12 2010, 04:51:29 UTC

Awesome update! I love that Ollie is really giving some thought to being with Chloe or is at least letting himself feel the spark between them. Oh, it's also fun seeing Clark in the picture. I wonder how close Clark and Chloe will get in this story without all the baggage over their heads.

thank you thank you anonymous November 12 2010, 05:04:37 UTC

thank you thank you for updating it so fast... wow, I like the story this way much better. I think chloe and oliver are perfect together, see how the dark knight compares. it would be interesting, clark, ollie, dark knight all eventually liking chloe and chloe getting powers as in healing ability.. Maybe? but any ho, update soon because I am dying for more....

One more thing anonymous November 12 2010, 05:08:03 UTC

One more thing, it would be very interesting to see how ollie's relationship with chloe changes and progresses also. please update soon...

lali_lewicki November 12 2010, 05:54:03 UTC

Ok... I can go to bed now! ;)

Loved the chapter but am too sleepy to say much more... just wanted to drop a line.

isdon_isgood9 November 12 2010, 06:02:35 UTC

You are on a real roll with this at the moment, it's great. I'm enjoying getting updates so quickly.

Now I love so many things about this chapter but I love the way you played Clark in this chapter and how you integrated Chloe and Oliver into the scenes together. Of course these moments would only be followed by Lois rejecting Oliver's offer to send her back to the lodge. Hilarious : )

I cna't wait for more so I hope the roll continues and you update soon.

sarcastic_fina November 12 2010, 06:13:55 UTC

I've been following my muse as it directs me and it's got its claws in this story so I'm just enjoying the ride, haha.

...I love the way you played Clark in this chapter and how you integrated Chloe and Oliver into the scenes together.Phew! I was really worried about how Clark was being portrayed. He doesn't have Chloe's influence so he will act differently, but he's got Chloe in front of him now, giving him this sort of gentle but firm view of her own world, kind of nudging him on his own path ( ... )

isdon_isgood9 November 13 2010, 01:36:40 UTC

So is it your plan now, to go episode by episode? I'm sorry I can't appreciate the work you are doing integrating this story into the SV canon, but I do so enjoy it. You got right to the heart of how I see Clark Kent (but not so overly self righteous as to be unpalatable). Now I wonder how you are going to have Lois and Clark meet without Chloe or if they will or if it'll even be mentioned in the story. Also, was I reading more into it or was it Milo who called Clark to warn him about Oliver? And I hope Chloe has a good explanation for where she was after Lois contacted her. You are writing so fast that I hope you don't get too worn out too quickly.

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